your emptiness
fills me up...
till i am drunk
slipping in and out of conciousness
remembering
the touch
i sit alone
water back
cup running over
our secret
i wrote the spell
and
you cry witch
i reply with moist lips
valley of maroon
dont fear me
just
love me love me
james...
i will never leave you...
About Me
- kida darling
- introverted, spontaneous, passionate, quiet, heartbroken, in love, smiling, removed, apparent in everything, these are journal entries, songs, quotes pouring out of her...
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1 comment:
Girl, i LOVED it! You really do an excellent job at taking your reader right into the thick of Charlie Mae's sad, fiery, longing for James HOWEVER, you do write soooo good that it makes ME crave to know specifics about what James did to hurt her, to make her want him so bad, did he ever make her happy i.e more of "the loneliness" and "Dark Water..."
I am also dying to know more about our Charlie, did she ever turn to another man for comfort...i.e."brush..."
I'll be patient and enjoy every one of charlie's words until she's ready to reveal all that though:-)
Keep it up girl - your writing ALWAYS inspires me to write.
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